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Dortmund 2016 2-2
« on: 13/06/2016, 21:16:39 »

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Re: Dortmund 2016 2-2
« Reply #1 on: 14/06/2016, 07:59:38 »
Hi Carlo,

Thank you for posting another three of your images. Some feedback:

1. Love the composition, I think it worked very well you took it with your camera extended outside the walkway. The only thing I might change in the image is to lower the brightness a bit (especially of the brightest parts). I think that would give it even more “atmosphere”.

2. The rain, combined with your HDR processing, really does something to the image, makes it look really painterly. The composition works for me too. Nice.

3. Here I would enhance the contrast (a lot), and perhaps add some more “structure” too. Compositionally, I think the left side is a bit too close to the side (but I see you didn't want the grate to be too dominant here). On the other hand, the right side could be cropped tighter.

But all in all, again very nice images! 8)
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